Mary Sue Test

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It's about my new indian lady who is guardian angel inside.



[/] They are possessed by an angel.

[ ] They are possessed by a demon. 
[ ] They are a werewolf//vampire//faerie. 
                             [ ] They are physically strong
[ ] They have a rare hair//fur colour. 
[/] Their eyes are an unusual colour. (Sparkling colors)
[ ] This eye colour happens to be red.
[/] Their eyes change colour. (Depends on her feelings and emotions)
[ ] They have wings. 
[ ] They can grow extra body parts//shapeshift. 
[ ] They are immortal. 
[ ] [If female.] They have large boobs. 
[ ] [If male.] They are very muscular. 
[ ] They are very attractive to the opposite gender. 
[ ] They are telekinetic//pyrokinetic//etc. 
[/] They have sixth (sense)/can mind-read/etc. 
[/] They have an object of some sort that gives them powers. (It was the jewel and her earrings)
[ ] They have a special ability//power, but they don't know about it yet.
[ ] They were bestowed//cursed with these powers. 
[/] They are a healer. (As a guardian angel, her power can heal anyone she saved)
[/] They are from a very rich//royal family. 
[ ] They don't know that they are from a very rich//royal background. 
[/] They have lost one/both of their parents. (Her mother was getting killed by the monster near her home while her father died of his old age)
[ ] They ran away from home. 
[ ] Their parents are cruel, uncaring, abusive etc. 
[/] They witnessed one//both of their parent's deaths. (Both of their death)
[/] They are part angel//demon//faerie//some other mythical creature.
[ ] They never knew their parents. 
[/] They were abused//spoiled as a child. (She is abused and called several names)
[ ] They are very attractive to the same gender. 
[/] They have lots of friends (I'm counting over an hundred as "lot" (Counting people who is saved by her)
[ ] They are emo//cutesy. 
[/] They look much younger//older than they really are. (possibly older)
[ ] They are currently in a relationship. 
[ ] They have lots of morals and declare them a fair bit. 
[/] They have a mental disorder.
[ ] They have an emotional disorder.
[ ] They struggle to stay sane. 
[/] They are a psycho. 
[/] They have multiple personalities.
[/] They are very intelligent. 
[ ] They have hallucinations.
[ ] They can summon spirits//demons//angels etc. 
[ ] They have an unusual//unrealistic pet. 
[/] They have a guardian spirit. 
[/] They have a 'special type' of soul. 
[ Their soul is not the same as them.
[ ] They can talk to spirits//ghosts.
[ ] Some part of their body glows. 
[/] They have a rare//unusual name. 
[/] They were born on an important date, such as New Year's Eve, etc. 
[ ] They have a twin//sibling that they were separated from at birth//a young age. 
[/] They are connected with a certain element.
[ ] They are connected with a certain animal. 
[ ] They look quite a bit like a character from a popular anime//manga
[ ] They are a race//species that is discriminated against//misunderstood.
[ ] They have a certain power that is misunderstood//feared. 
[ ] They live//lived on the streets at some point in their lives.  
[ ] They are hiding from someone//something. 
[ ] They have blood type. 
[ ] They cry blood. 
[ ] Certain noises//smells//situations//etc. make their powers activate//give them a nervous breakdown. 
[ ] They are from a different country to where they live, a.k.a 'exotic'. 
[/] They are very mysterious//dark. 
[ ] They are very lively//happy. 
[ ] Their mood changes a lot/very quickly. 
[/] They are very patient.
[ ] They are from a long line of [insert profession//power here].
[ ] They have a piece of jewellery//clothing that they always wear.
[ ] They have amnesia. 
[ ] They have some sort of permanent medical condition.
[ ] The have a some sort of unbeneficial curse upon them. 
[ ] They are involved in some sort of prophecy. 
[ ] They are 'the chosen one'. 
[/] They have insomnia. 


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Point Reduction :: 1
Take points off your OC's overall score if they fit any of the following statements ::

[ ] They smoke. 
[ ] They are an alcoholic.
[ ] They are overweight.
[ ] They are addicted to drugs.
[ ] They have a short temper.
[ ] They enjoy bullying others.
[/] They do not care much about others.
[/] They are relatively emotionless. (Rarely)

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23 points
Oh my, she is almost a Mary Sue ;w;
I guess i overthink over an indian character


(legimately thinks of Symmetra)
Oh.

< 05 :: Anti-Sue.
Your character may be a bit on the boring side. Of course, this does depend, but generally if they score that low, it wouldn't hurt to 'spice them up' a bit. 

06-15 :: Balanced Character. 
If your OC scored around here, then they are probably quite a well-balanced and interesting character. Those scoring in the higher end of this category may be a bit too much though. 

16-25 :: Borderline Mary-Sue. 
We have a problem. You need to tone your character down. They are most likely a bit annoying to others, too.

> 26 :: Mary-Sue. 
Please revise your character... right now.
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